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04-25-2008, 01:20 PM
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LuB~DuB .. I'm alive .!
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: AD~
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Am I PURE?
Hello everybody ! I'm new here, I loved the place so I've decided to show my work even if it is more than simple I have took the rose pic from my mobile and you might guess that when you see  Am I PURE?  thank you ^^ |
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04-25-2008, 02:25 PM
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Administrator/Founder
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,034
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Nice photo, i think the typography needs playing around with though. I think the red type takes away from the photo and the text "pure" is very hard to see and I would remove design by at the top.
Just add like a simple caption at the bottom in a neutral text, at least thats what i would do. |
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04-25-2008, 02:36 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Norway
Posts: 665
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I think the black frame suffocates it, until the point of death. Try a white one instead, or a thin black one. And I read "Am I ?" - then I read Gino's comment and tilted my screen almost 45 degrees before I could see the text that said "pure". The flower IS very pure, the bloodred font and the black frame isn't, try to adjust those elements so they enhance the picture, not kill it. The picture is the focal point afterall
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04-26-2008, 10:20 AM
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LuB~DuB .. I'm alive .!
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: AD~
Posts: 2
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Hello again thank you Gino & alyCe here is my adjustment  and by time I will improve hopefully ^^ |
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04-27-2008, 01:16 AM
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 564
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There are still many changes to be made imo.
1. Remove the "Designed by" 2a. Work with the font. 2b. Find a font that flows with the photo. 2c. The colors are nice but the "Pure" aspect is off. These are just my opinions. Hope to see a new draft soon.  ~chris |
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04-27-2008, 07:56 AM
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Web Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: London
Posts: 341
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The font you used for "designed by" fits the image much better so maybe you could use that for the "am I pure" text instead and just loose the "designed by" text as it doesn't add anything to the piece anyway.
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