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Old 05-08-2008, 07:49 PM   #11
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Suggestion: Reduce the grain, and take away the xB and the 3d stuff in the background. Otherwise, pretty cool.
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Old 05-08-2008, 07:51 PM   #12
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yea i agree with leftover
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Old 05-09-2008, 03:46 AM   #13
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dont really like that one
would be nice if you tried to explain what about it you don't like, it's easier for the designer to remake into a better piece if he/she gets constructive feedback
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Old 05-09-2008, 08:40 AM   #14
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will do alyce
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Old 05-09-2008, 09:32 AM   #15
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The first one looks pretty cool. The stretched car effect works for it. The text is somewhat off in my opinion thought.

The second one doesn't get bigger when I click on it so I can't see it.

The third one is too granulized (sp?) and is not flowing as well as it could. Try blending the elements together.

Hope this helps and Keep it up.

Feel free to just post your images instead of thumbnails if they are like sig size and such!

Thanks,

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