I have been playing!

aandy · 05-13-2008, 04:31 PM

Hi Everyone, I have been playing with loads of new tutorials and am loving them all, so i thought I would try and put them all together and make something nice.

Hope you like it. I have already had some good comments from my colleagues, friends and family and am impressed with the way it has come out so far.

Susanna-Cole · 05-13-2008, 05:44 PM

I really like it! Very professional looking, love the colors, it's sleek while still be rather fun. The only thing that bothers me bit about it, is I feel like it has a sort of fluid motion, quite like water actually (especially with the way the lines drop off like water drops), and I do like how the lines comes up through the text, I would just possibly connect those lines. I feel like that would keep the whole piece fluid. But of course, it's simply just my opinion. Others may disagree!

freestyle · 05-13-2008, 06:03 PM

it looks cool but it looks like theres yellow markers on the background color and behind the text looks like theres some kind of white shadow

leftover_color · 05-13-2008, 06:33 PM

I didnt even notice the clouds in the background. Very nice overall though. Love the colors!

freestyle · 05-13-2008, 08:32 PM

it looks funny try bringing the opacity up and remove the white behind the text.
but thats just my opinion

aandy · 05-14-2008, 02:23 AM

There are yellow clouds behind and there is a motion blur on the background of the text. It is more visable at the full resolution, but couldnt put that on here as its huge. Thanks for the coments. I am still playing with it realy, because I wanted to do something else with the text but couldnt get Ilustrator to load. Will keep playing.

ardcor · 05-14-2008, 03:09 AM

ohhhhhhhhhhh colourssssss. not too sure about the wavy lines though. the straight ones remind me of the lg advert which is going around for a tv.

aandy · 05-14-2008, 04:58 AM

Yeah, I wasnt sure about them either. Think it looks good going through the text but not too sure about it fully.....

chris · 05-14-2008, 05:02 PM

Looks cool though the white behind the text looks strange as Free has already said.

Keep up the good work and you could attach the file or link us to a full res version if you want!

~chris

aandy · 05-15-2008, 02:41 AM

Good thinking. Here is the full res version http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk/imag...Background.jpg

I had a thought last night which i will be implamenting today. I am going to remove the two 'tenticles' and replace them with a line flowing in the same direction as the other rainbow lines but weave it through the text. Thanks for all of your comments. Really cheered me up.

05-13-2008, 04:31 PM	#1
aandy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Durham Posts: 34	I have been playing! Hi Everyone, I have been playing with loads of new tutorials and am loving them all, so i thought I would try and put them all together and make something nice. Hope you like it. I have already had some good comments from my colleagues, friends and family and am impressed with the way it has come out so far. __________________ http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk

05-13-2008, 05:44 PM	#2
Susanna-Cole Wild Child Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 77	I really like it! Very professional looking, love the colors, it's sleek while still be rather fun. The only thing that bothers me bit about it, is I feel like it has a sort of fluid motion, quite like water actually (especially with the way the lines drop off like water drops), and I do like how the lines comes up through the text, I would just possibly connect those lines. I feel like that would keep the whole piece fluid. But of course, it's simply just my opinion. Others may disagree! __________________ www.susannacoleking.co.nr http://girlmeetsnyc.blogspot.com

05-14-2008, 02:23 AM	#6
aandy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Durham Posts: 34	There are yellow clouds behind and there is a motion blur on the background of the text. It is more visable at the full resolution, but couldnt put that on here as its huge. Thanks for the coments. I am still playing with it realy, because I wanted to do something else with the text but couldnt get Ilustrator to load. Will keep playing. __________________ http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk

05-14-2008, 03:09 AM	#7
ardcor Ardcor Massive Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: London UK Posts: 313	ohhhhhhhhhhh colourssssss. not too sure about the wavy lines though. the straight ones remind me of the lg advert which is going around for a tv. __________________ Now you can hire me! My Site - www.adamwoodhouse.co.uk My DA - http://ardcor.deviantart.com Me on Adobe.com http://www.adobe.com/designcenter/ga...tent=woodhouse

05-14-2008, 04:58 AM	#8
aandy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Durham Posts: 34	Yeah, I wasnt sure about them either. Think it looks good going through the text but not too sure about it fully..... __________________ http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk


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05-13-2008, 06:03 PM	#3
freestyle Senior Designer Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 419	it looks cool but it looks like theres yellow markers on the background color and behind the text looks like theres some kind of white shadow

05-13-2008, 06:33 PM	#4
leftover_color Senior Designer Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 357	I didnt even notice the clouds in the background. Very nice overall though. Love the colors!

05-13-2008, 08:32 PM	#5
freestyle Senior Designer Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 419	it looks funny try bringing the opacity up and remove the white behind the text. but thats just my opinion

05-14-2008, 05:02 PM	#9
chris Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 503	Looks cool though the white behind the text looks strange as Free has already said. Keep up the good work and you could attach the file or link us to a full res version if you want! ~chris __________________ PORTFOLIO // SHIRTS // HOME

05-15-2008, 02:41 AM	#10
aandy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Durham Posts: 34	Good thinking. Here is the full res version http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk/imag...Background.jpg I had a thought last night which i will be implamenting today. I am going to remove the two 'tenticles' and replace them with a line flowing in the same direction as the other rainbow lines but weave it through the text. Thanks for all of your comments. Really cheered me up. __________________ http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk

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