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05-17-2008, 03:54 PM
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Intern
Join Date: May 2008
Location: United Kingdom
Posts: 13
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"Cage" Advert Design
Here is an advert I designed for a friend. It was rushed, doesn't really have a lot of depth and could be a lot better but ah well have fun viewing.
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05-17-2008, 05:16 PM
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: San Jose, CA
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Looks nice but there is an over use of GuassianBlue/Glow effects.
I will comment more when I get back from the gym ~chris |
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05-17-2008, 07:55 PM
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Administrator/Founder
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: NYC
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I love the background but the text is hard to read, cause its blurry.
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05-17-2008, 11:37 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 359
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I agree with all. Try adding the blur only to the accented words or not at all. Looks good otherwise though!
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05-18-2008, 06:49 AM
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Norway
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Agree with everyone else, and... what does Nike have to do with it?
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05-18-2008, 07:23 AM
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Intern
Join Date: May 2008
Location: United Kingdom
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Oh my friend asked for the Nike logo to be on it.
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05-18-2008, 07:43 AM
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Wild Child
Join Date: May 2008
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05-18-2008, 08:36 AM
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05-18-2008, 09:42 AM
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Intern
Join Date: May 2008
Location: United Kingdom
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@ Susanna-Cole : It was just a school project he wanted help on, so I knew it wouldn't be commercially advertised or anything
 . Oh yeah btw is that you in the B&W picture on your site?@ alyCe : Well my friend was designing a street football style cage, purely for a project not for industry or anything. So he asked for the Nike logo to be on it probably to show a representable affiliate I'm not sure. And yeah I did over use the GuassianBlur effect but I was being lazy and rushed it so I thought it would do haha. Last edited by ºJaySee : 05-18-2008 at 09:47 AM. |
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05-18-2008, 09:55 AM
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Wild Child
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And yeah, that's me.  Why do you ask? Or just wondering... |
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